on Thursday the year six walked up cooks cove, fristley koka ngaire split us into groups. secondly we drove to cooks cove in tolga bay, i went with haruru roris mum. when we got there we started walking up it in single file lines. the first couple of steps were a piece of cake but then i started to get tied and started to puff.
As i puffed up the steps i saw we were quarter way but i thort we were there but fifteen minutes later i knew this was only the start. but then we maded it to the look out and i was sooo happy!
hi millie this is a really good post but you could learn how firstly but other than that its good. Reef
ReplyDeleteHi Millie, I am Neko, I liked how you used your personal voice. You could improve on your spelling and more writing. But it was good. It reminds me of the big hole in the wall, it looks like an asteroid busted it open! What bit of the walk did you like the most.
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