Tuesday, 2 April 2019

Bad Banana

Bad Banana was going to the shop. But he saw a baby so he picked it up. 

 The baby started to cry.  He had an idea he was going to kidnap her so he did. He took her to his house. 

 The baby's mum reported it to the police. The police  knew it was something that Bad Banana would do. sSo he got put in jail.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 April 2019 at 11:06

    Kia ora, I am Kayla from Wainui Beach School.
    I really liked the fact that it was a banana.
    I learnt that you shouldn’t be bad.
    Maybe you could add that good apple comes along and says that he should be good and then he would be a good banana.
    Well Done

    Mā te wā
    Kayla

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  2. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 14:13

    Hello Millie, Cool story. I like how the moral of the story was about consequences. Next time you could add a blurb about what the post is about. Also remember to check your Spelling and punctuation before posting.
    From Bonnie

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  3. Anonymous13 August 2019 at 09:14

    thanks bonnie yes next time i will do that

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