Monday 16 August 2021

A big mistake...

 Ryan didn't mean for it to happen. But he laughed with his friends at his sister as she fell off a very high  flying fox to the ground with a thud. he watched his sister in pain he walked with his friends back to his house. His friends lifted. His mum asked where is your sister? He said she is crying on the ground like a baby. I will go and see if shes all right his mum went to the play ground and shouted ryan go and get my phone now ryan and his mum were shocked there was blood everywhere. the ambulance finally came ryan told him mum everything.


 They got to the hospital and she was in a stable but critical condition two days pasted they took an x-ray she broke her neck and was suffering from dementia. when she got out of hospital she had to be in a well chair for the rest of he life ryan felt soooooooooooooo gilty, he got in big trouble!    


  

1 comment:

  1. Hey Millie,
    I really like your blog post.I think you could have done a capital letter after the full stop but great job! Did he push her little sister because he wanted to be cool?
    Alivia

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